- The font style on the magazine title doesn't stand out enough and the colour isn't bright enough against the background. - The red font on the sub headings and pull quote is hard to read on the white background, also only some of the heading is underlined. - The photo is good because it is a medium close-up and there is not to much space above the head but there is just enough space for the magazines title without it over lapping with the top of her head. - The quote needs to be a different font and colour because it is hard to read and doesn't stand out enough. - There is text wrapping with the pull quotes which looks good because it means the text doesn't overlap with her face. - The front cover needs a slogan that would be copied onto every issue along with the magazine logo.
- The font style on the magazine title doesn't stand out enough and the colour isn't bright enough against the background.
ReplyDelete- The red font on the sub headings and pull quote is hard to read on the white background, also only some of the heading is underlined.
- The photo is good because it is a medium close-up and there is not to much space above the head but there is just enough space for the magazines title without it over lapping with the top of her head.
- The quote needs to be a different font and colour because it is hard to read and doesn't stand out enough.
- There is text wrapping with the pull quotes which looks good because it means the text doesn't overlap with her face.
- The front cover needs a slogan that would be copied onto every issue along with the magazine logo.
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ReplyDeleteAmber said this not Kyran^
ReplyDeleteYou need to get the images on.
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